First T's Correction of My Job by m.Selakovic

I worked for many different companies, usually as book keeper. That period was very important for me because I was given an opportinity to create my own business style and also knowledge about main economic position in our country.

Now, I am working for HVB Bank like Account Manager. This is something new for me, and it is very challenging. My job is hard, fulfillding and responsible at the some time. It will give you chance for upgrading, if your work gets hight marks by the Branch Manager. My job description is: acquisition of new private clients and work as account officer for business clients.

There is a lot of paper work, and it can be very boring. Some of our clients can be very demanding and hard understanding. It takes a lot of energy and time. But when you get salary, everything is forgotten. It is bigger than salary of my previous jobs. Take it or live it!
What can I say? “Money makes the world go round”.

My Job by M.Selakovic

I worked for many different companies, usually as book keeper. That period was very important for me because I was given an opportinity to create my own business style and also knowledge about main economic position in our country.

Now, I am working for HVB Bank like Account Manager. This is something new for me, and it is very challenging. My job is hard, fulfillding and responsible at the some time. It will give you chance for upgrading, if your work gets hight marks by Branch Manager. My job description is: acquisition of new private clients and work as account officer for business clients.

There is a lot of paper work, and it can be very boring. Some of our clients can be very demanding and hard understanding. It takes a lot of energy and time. But when you get salary, everything is forgotten. It is bigger than salary of my previous jobs. Take it or live it!
What can I say “Money makes the world go round”.

Final T's Corr: My Job by M.Selaković

I work in the ''IMLEK'' A.D. Valjevo company that is a part of the biggest agrobysiness system in Serbia, called Danube Food Group. This system, a new brand in our country consists of many different parts of our industry such as Knjaz Milos from Arandjelovac, Banat from Vrsac, Bambi from Pozarevac...

My Company has got about 1200 people who work there, but unfortunately many of them can become unemployed. In my oppinion, the company started to grow very quickly after many important changes in our society. I take part in the quality control from farms to the Dairy, in rural parts of our country. I check up on our farmers, give them advice how to take care of cattle, how to produce much better quality of milk, and I am responsible for development of farms and making business much more profitable.

Sometimes, my job is very stressful and difficult, but sometimes I enjoy it, which helps me survive between all these awkward situations, problems and people who do not like me and my company.

Final T's correction: My Studies by J. Manojlovic

I was a student at the College of Economics “Prota Mateja Nenadovic” in Valjevo.The education lasted three years and I studied Management of Organizations. There were a lot of subjects and activities. I had to attend almost all classes because that was a condition if I wanted to take and pass my exams and I also had practical training which helped me to pass them. I worked on many seminar papers and presentations for different subjects. Sometimes professors organized seminars and visits to companies, banks and exhibitions for students.

The good side of my studies was that classes were organized very well and I had opportunity to choose some subjects; we had a Student’s Festival in which we could present our hobbies, sports competitions between colleges and students parties. I was a member of many working teams and a member of women’s volleyball team which represented our school in sports competition.

On the other hand, bad aspects of my studies were that I didn’t have enough training in companies which can help me in my future career.

1st T's Correction of My Studies by J.Manojlovic

Jelena, here are my first clues for those part of your text which could be improved. Look for spelling, vocabulary or grammar mistakes. The last sentence needs some paraphrasing if you want to get your message across.

I was a student at the Collage of Economics “Prota Mateja Nenadovic” in Valjevo. Education lasted three years and I learned about Management of Organizations.

I had many subjects and activities. I had to attend on almost all classes because that was condition if I wanted to pass my exams and I had practices which helped me to pass them. I made many seminars works and presentations from different subjects. I was member of many works teams and member of woman volleyball team which presented our school on sports competition. I had opportunity to participate in Student’s Festival and presented my hobby.

The good side of my studies was that classes was organized very well and I had opportunity to chosed some subjects; we had Student’s Festival in which we could present our hobbies, sports competition between collages and students partys. Sometimes professors organized seminars and visities of companies, banks and exhibitions for students.

On the other hand, bad aspects of my studies was that I didn’t have enough practices in companys which can help me when I would like to find job.