1st T's correction: SUCCESS STORIES IN SERBIA by N.Drakul

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MILAN PANIC

I think that the best way to start the story about M. Panic with his words ‘’ Where I go into business, I have to be number one. Or, I just don’t get involved. It is my rule that whatever I do has to advance, to augment and to bring profit." Hi is just that; men-ambition, men-vision.
But for understanding that we have to go back over forty years, when started the successful story of M. Panic. The story of M. Panic is a very American story – a prime example of the people who made America what is today. America is a nation of immigrants and Panic has the very qualities of first generation immigrants who turned America into economic progress.
Milan Panic is the founder and owner of MP Global Enterprises and Associates LLC, headquartered in Costa Mesa, California. The company focuses on both business and humanitarian issues around the world. Hi founded the company ICN Pharmaceuticals forty years ago and its phenomenal growth is the best explanation of the infectious impact of his closest colleagues. Foundation of ICN was his strategic vision to expand over the oceans and seas that placed the company in a position to benefit from the beginning globalization of world economy in the new millenium.
Why I extraordinarily respect his success; because the little immigrant from Serbia, which in the first days in America tought that hi have to survive, and which made of nothing a big company. In this time hi knew that hi is part of powerful vision of a future where people will live like immigrants in the whole world. The world on day will become like America. Everybody will be accepted everywhere, but hi learned other truth; that everybody want to help you while you are poor, while you are an outside. But, the moment you succeed, everybody want to pull down.
It was a short story about Milan Panic, Entrepreneur, Statesman, Global Businessman, Humanist, Citizen, Scientist, Philanthropist, Charismatic Leader, man who has the wealth in his heart and in his soul not only in gold and bank books.